Eve In Her Garden ...
Eve in Her Garden in This Vale of Tears
Accursed be the soil because of you.
With suffering shall you get your food from it
every day of your life.
- Gen. 3:17
I spend a lot of time upon my knees
serving the earth.
I sow seeds in soil.
I arrange the roots of trees in rich peat moss.
Ising "sean-nös" in chorus with
vixens, donkeys, bees, hens,
children, ravens, cows...
I understand the why and wherefore of the worm's knot,
the warbling and the chuckling of birds.
Under my care
apples grow,
ears of oats turn blond,
hens go broody, cows seek the bull,
love puts down roots.
The drops on my brow
are sweated delight.
The child is worth the birth pang.
Life is worth its price.
I cancel out the curse of God,
defeat his greatest effort.
I grow posies of flowers
on the hobstone of hell.
Translated from the Irish by Nuala Ni Dhomhnaill
Translator's Note
I love Genesis poems. They are the ultimate tabula rasa. They give
the poet carte blanche to create the world anew. Lots of us have had
ideas about how to clean up the mess. We have all been arrogant
enough, at one time or another, to think God rather stupid. Now if
we were God, the world would be in a different state. Things would
be in much better shape, and so on and so forth. So when I opened
. Biddy Jenkinson's new book of poems, Oiche Bhealtaine, and came
across this poem, my heart leapt in my breast.
Except it is not strictly a Genesis poem. It is a post-Genesis poem.
Instead of wishing for the world anew, the poet gets on with what
we've got and makes it sacred too. A keen gardener, she takes upon
herself the stewardship of the earth, the lot of mankind since the loss
of Eden, and, instead of finding it a curse, she turns it into a blessing.
Life is worth its price. The child is worth the pangs of birth. The
sweat of her brow, by which she has been ordained to earn her bread,
has become the very joy (French feminist jouissance) of existence.
Death, where is thy sting? A life of conscious effort, imbued by a
sense of blessing for the very fact of existence, makes a mockery of
the curse of God - "For dust thou art /And to dust thou shall return."
For what if being dust were a felicity in itself? A part of the natural
round of being, the (not necessarily Disney) greater circle of life. Down
on our knees in the dust where we belong, we can make the earth
flower, the dust itself break into verdant blossom.
According to this philosophy, even a poem may resound in the
abyss of emptiness. A poem of such inherent benevolence in a minority
language such as Irish challenges the erasure of memory and mocks
the trauma of colonization and alienation. Even if we are put out of
the original garden, so what! We can recreate it with pleasure and
gusto. This is why I love this simple poem so much. It enshrines a
view of life that goes far beyond the contemporary fashion of victim-
hood. It encourages us not only to "gather ye rosebuds" but also to
plant them. - N.Ni.Dh.
Structure
61 lines · 8 stanzas