Sensing Duncan

"do you know this poem by Emily Dickinson?" asked
by a woman who had savored
with her body only a few lines
of the relations that stream from Eden-
"Tve read all 1470!" I answered,
and feel the hand smooth out the sand, erasing
careful finger-drawn lines of play,
who also looked up and asked
"4s it romantic
to arrange stones,"
-when now another
woman has lost the milk in her right breast,
what might I have done to move all that consciousness to
her left, to disturb
the balance of closed valves
"like stone" -
The ego finding itself
at first is weak, nearly
brought down, nearly losing all the creation of
breaking away, guilt
is a fall, but fall as season in the cycle of Mother
drawing into winter, spring, all our pushing-back, our
attempts to free
a line of stone from shored
margins,
she plays in aura
and arranges A, C,
currents
more precise? more wakefully natural
than tide run, roll & failure of sea to sun.

Structure

30 lines · 4 stanzas